It's me, Beautiful Duwang again. Glad to see this here as well, I appreciate the effort you were able to put into this. Once again I give my utmost thanks for this~
It's me, Beautiful Duwang again. Glad to see this here as well, I appreciate the effort you were able to put into this. Once again I give my utmost thanks for this~
It's not too bad for your first attempt, there have been worse. The mic quality is actually pretty good, the words are clear, and I don't have any problems understanding the dialogue. The animation presented the action pretty well, it was easy to keep track of what was going on. On that note, it's also choppy, and could use more frames to smooth out the movements.
In short, good first attempt. Take what you've learned from this project and make strides to making the next submission better. Good luck.
Thanks a lot for the response. Choppyness noted. I'll try and smooth things out more this next time! Thanks again.
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